Saturday, December 25, 2010

Scary night

It's been sometime that I was away from writing/blogging/commenting...I just wanted to come back and just drafted this small story within minutes!Please let me know your comments :)

It was pitch dark and the sky was engulfed with dark clouds.The moon shone with its lovely beauty.Stars dangled and was playing hide and seek with the dark clouds.She was all alone with just a candle as her company.The pitch dark surrounding scared her a lot.Thunder bolted with its cacophony and harsh wind blew which not only disheveled her hair but also killed her company...Her body started to tremble and the air was filled with jitters.She started to move out from the place but her legs were so weak because of her ailment from the fever...Her memories went back and retrived stories narrated by her granny..Phew all the stories were relating to ghost which created extra scariness...Started as a cute little drop the rain started to fall on the earth with its sudden madness.Her body started to shiver and her face went pale.Her eyes were apple red and was searching for something or someone.All her fear vanished within a jiffy when the power came back and bright light splashed on her face.

5 comments:

Madan Panathula said...

Its always a pleasure to read what you write.... Undoubtedly it was a nice read Gowri. :)

Annapoorani Sivaramakrishnan said...

@Madhu,

Thank you so much for all your lovely words :)

Unknown said...

what a lovely story

Choti Writer said...

Loved the vivid descriptions contained in your story!

Annapoorani Sivaramakrishnan said...

@Kasthuri,

Thanks :)

@Choti,

Thank you so much

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